magpiefikir
The Pyramids of Xuxux
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Post by magpiefikir on Oct 18, 2011 19:36:14 GMT -5
Yeah, back when DoM NoW was all I had, I had to start a CandyxLetheo fic beginning in the Dead Man's House. It's not dead yet, and I have a second chapter started, but I think feedback would give me some direction. And since none of my friends know these books, I rely on conversation with other followers of Abarat. Um, here's the link: www.fanfiction.net/s/7473779/1/Taming_the_BeastBoyOh! It does have mature themes, and I fear it may grow more mature. Also, title could use some re-tooling. |
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requiax
Autland
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Post by requiax on Oct 19, 2011 16:08:32 GMT -5
Ah, good luck with it. The Dead Man's House could have gone so many ways; I've seen a lot of interesting spinoffs. I'm excited to read yours!
Haha tell me if you wanted more detailed feedback than that.
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magpiefikir
The Pyramids of Xuxux
Lady of the Tilted Text[Mo0:24]
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Post by magpiefikir on Oct 21, 2011 9:26:35 GMT -5
Any thoughts on the possible mature pairing of CandyxLetheo? I'm a little worried about it. XP
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requiax
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Post by requiax on Oct 22, 2011 17:21:18 GMT -5
Hmm.. well, since it's a teen book and we start off so far from anything sexual, I think you could have some development time before anything too mature happens, yeah? But I've definitely seen a mature CandyxCarrion pairing before... so I'm quite far from banishing the thought haha Does that make sense? Go for it, you're the author  |
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