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May 22, 2009 16:36:45 GMT -5
Post by caitycat66 on May 22, 2009 16:36:45 GMT -5
I wrote a poem and put it on fanfiction.net... It's really bad. I don't do poetry. But I'd like some constructive criticism. If you'd like to go check it out, I'd appreciate it. No pressure though. Regrets, under Books, then Abarat.
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Jun 12, 2009 16:30:49 GMT -5
Post by caitycat66 on Jun 12, 2009 16:30:49 GMT -5
I revised it and made a change. I don't offend easily, so please be honest.
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Jun 20, 2009 8:51:14 GMT -5
Post by RedStockings on Jun 20, 2009 8:51:14 GMT -5
Neither of these links are working!
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Usagi
Autland
[Mo0:0]
Posts: 297
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Jun 20, 2009 22:16:10 GMT -5
Post by Usagi on Jun 20, 2009 22:16:10 GMT -5
Agreed D=
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Jun 21, 2009 8:40:23 GMT -5
Post by caitycat66 on Jun 21, 2009 8:40:23 GMT -5
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Jun 22, 2009 11:09:07 GMT -5
Post by caitycat66 on Jun 22, 2009 11:09:07 GMT -5
Did it work?
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Sept 10, 2009 15:04:34 GMT -5
Post by RedStockings on Sept 10, 2009 15:04:34 GMT -5
Yep, it's working now.
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Oct 12, 2009 19:32:45 GMT -5
Post by caitycat66 on Oct 12, 2009 19:32:45 GMT -5
What do ya'll think? Any good? Or back to the drawing board?
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